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I like that you left it open ended. It fit very well for the story and made the soulless machine even more mysterious and evil. I hope you will be able to write more soon. Keep up the great work!

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Really thought provoking story. Cool steampunk/pulp sci-fi vibe too. I enjoyed it! Why are the clockwork overlords are only invading certain places? Is that because some towns are more likely to "conform" than others? That was my guess while reading. I love awesome sci-fi like this that gives us a 'what if' glimpse into the future. Nicely done! Thank you. PS I found your story through the Iron Age prompts.

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